Loneliness

Hey loneliness.  Its a pleasure being with you again.

But i must confess i haven't missed ya.

We had some great times together.

But im not pleased wit the idea of reliving them again.

You are always there to consolidate me, but i don't want to keep doin it.

Why? Why? Why did you have to come back? Why didn't you stay in your place, why did you have to find me?

Wasn't my hiding place good enough? Or is it that we are destined to be for ever together?

The truth, I still dunno

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Laurie  Lane's picture

Interesting way to express loneliness. I really like it. Nice poem.

hawksquaw99's picture

wow .... what a unique idea for a poem.... I loved this... and hate that anyone has to hang out with my old enemy LONELINESS......been wondering though where he was these days... I see... I guess I am not as good at entertaining him as you are.... hate that... oh well... take care and know that he will soon grow bored with you ... and on to someone else.... I loved this... it was wonderful..... thank you Renee'

Michelle's picture

I really like the approach you took in this poem. I understand lonliness.....unfortunately. Great Poem.....thank you!!