"Please forgive me?"
Could I? Should I? Would I?
As I gazed into his eyes.
I knew my reply.
I placed a finger on his lips.
To stop his panic…Almost manic.
"Shhh." I whispered softly. "No more."
Was it really six months ago, he’d walked out the door?
I wanted to ask.
I needed to know.
Where the hell had he been?
Where the fuck did he go?
Was he with her?
The reason he’d left.
Back here with me now.
Did he leave her bereft?
The angel on my left whispered.
"Say no more.
He’s back. Let him stay.
Don’t make forgiveness a chore."
The devil on the right decided.
"No way! Don’t take him back. Don’t you dare let him stay."
And me in the middle, a smirk on my face.
"There’s the door babe…Get the fuck out of my place!"
Revenge is a woman.
Wearing tight arse jeans.
Compelled by foreign instincts.
That for once…She’d be mean!
I hope you'll all forgive me?
But instead of feeling sad.
I turned it round the opposite.
And ended up...Just mad!
love this read, a realy
love this read, a realy good poem. Decisions, decisions!! I loved the line don't make forgiveness a chore.
I liked the ending too got mad instead of sad. Great poem and rhyming also choice of words.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you for your comment. I
Thank you for your comment. I guess it's amazing what you can do given the right incentive!
Old Flame
Been burning too long
your wick is weak
the once hot handle cold
a small light flickers
insufficient to shadow
wan as a clouded star
blue almost sad
Whooah!
Out.
~~A~~
02-26-13
9:08p
If by that you mean it's
If by that you mean it's crap...Yeah I know.
Think I'll give up and stick to erotica.
Thanks for your comments.
I appreciate your honesty.
lol i think she was
lol i think she was metaphorizing(?) your decison regarding mystery man here. maybe im wrong, idk. i thought it was good though.
Oh! Now who feels like a
Oh! Now who feels like a dumbarse?
Never thought of that...Thanks sweetie.
Super Write
I always metaphorize - my comment was aimed at the dude - the poem was THE GREATEST VENT EVER - well almost :D ~A~