19 April 2006 - 11:39am — Craig Morris (not verified)
Wonderful writing! I believe this to be about the pressures put upon us by modern society to conform to what IT believes to be the normality. Constrictions and labels tend to be tagged onto us daily these days. Poetry can liberate the mind as well as the spirit, and sublime, intellectual writing like yours (with a strong independent message) is in short supply. I found your writing a breath of fresh air, and look forward to reading more from you. Well done.
i really liked this poem. I feel this way sometimes. It is really heartfelt
Wonderful writing! I believe this to be about the pressures put upon us by modern society to conform to what IT believes to be the normality. Constrictions and labels tend to be tagged onto us daily these days. Poetry can liberate the mind as well as the spirit, and sublime, intellectual writing like yours (with a strong independent message) is in short supply. I found your writing a breath of fresh air, and look forward to reading more from you. Well done.