Floating in the clouds
In a dreamland full of wonder,
with stars glittering all over,
where the sun and the moon both shine at once,
And there is no evil, but love is everywhere,
I see people flying with wings then notice my own,
I see flowers from meadow to meadow, valley to hill,
Then I see you by my side holding my hand while we fly,
I get a feeling everything is complete,
Then i hear a buzzing noise; I open my eyes,
It was morning,
All was lost,
Except the memory of my dream with you.
sorry im not very good at reviews but im trying. i thought it was good, great imagery and visual words. i would like to see other poems that you create. as a personal idea, i would like to see maybe different types of poem, rather than all love poems. dont get me wrong, they're good, but i want to see what else you can write. ok thats it. sorry if this review stinks which it probably does, but i tried.