Everyone thought I was perfect,
But there is more than the eye can see,
Despite the childish and bad habits,
Temper tantrums,
And the occational crying and whining,
I was far from perfect.
I always loved bugs,
Dirt,
Snakes,
And just plain getting dirty!
Hated to wear dresses,
But loved Barbie dolls,
I was a cross between a boy and a girl,
Boy characteristics,
Yet, a girly outside,
I guess you could call me a tomboy,
But my mother would defiantly disagree,
But she couldn’t deny that,
I loved,
To get dirty,
I Started soccer when I was 6,
Been with it ever since,
I hated to wear dresses, yet, I hated jeans,
I was scrawny,
Short,
And a big head,
With massive hair coming out of both sides of my head,
Like 2 fury animal tails,
Which my mother called “pig tails” anyway,
I was a rebel in preschool..loved to push kids around,
Yet, I was a good girl through out elementary school to today.
As I grew up I changed,
Not sure how,
But it is kind of like an internal feeling,
I was a flower,
Blooming,
Into a young woman,
Everything around me felt better,
I had twice as many friends as I had last year,
But all I know is,
The future holds,
Something great for me
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