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If You Were My Everything
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Lust, Love, & Lofty Confusion If you were a song, you would be the most harmonious.
If you were a flower, you would be a field of roses.
If you were an ocean, I would be a fisherman.
If you were a rock, you would be a gem.
If you were a memory, you would be unforgettable.
If you were a bird, you could soar to heights not seen.
If you were the night, I would be the dawn
If you were a flame, you would be eternal.
If you were a shoe, it would only be fit for a King.
If you were a breath, you would be the wind.
If you were a cloth, I would sow you to my heart.
If you were a gift, I could never stop praising the Sender.
And, if you were mine, I would love you forever.
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This is exacly my kind of poem. I love all of yours that you have posted. I had a feeling the last two lines would end it perfectly and they did not disappoint. 10/10
thank you so much!!! :)
thank you so much!!! :)
excellient job . this poems
excellient job . this poems is it own
thank you!! i rly appreciate
thank you!! i rly appreciate it!!! :)
great structure, even greater meaning
Real poetry captures the readers attention, makes them feel something, and this is indeed real poetry. Besides the obvious excellent choice- of-word.....the lay out and structure make this a win. Well done
wow thank you so much....i
wow thank you so much....i tend to stuggle with whether or not my poetry is good enough so i really appreciate that :)
I love it! Especially the
I love it! Especially the last two lines. They're such beautiful promises to a loved one.
Aw thank you so much.... I
Aw thank you so much.... I wrote this for someone I promised to always love
That's absolutely beautiful.
That's absolutely beautiful. Love it!
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Thank u so much :)!!.... p.s.
Thank u so much :)!!.... p.s. I love ur poems!!!
:) Thanks!!! :)
:) Thanks!!! :)
Copyright © JessterStarshine
great job
I love your poem, going through exaclty what you described right now.
awww thank you so much i rly
awww thank you so much i rly appreciate it.... cheers to love ;)
no problem
no problem, haha well toast to love a little later, still waiting to see
Lol ik how u feel and good
Lol ik how u feel and good luck :)