"Are You Bortal... Or Mortal?" 12 - 01 - 03
i see the world does it see me
this blind world it's a disease
i am the victim stuck in here
part of the system held by fear
guns and fires kill every day
taboo desires condemned if stray
i wish for more than a friend
but it's a chore useless in the end
marriage is a jail morals are a sin
i'm going to hell i know i won't win
so join in the game where everyone dies
there's no blame and that's not a lie
your "here and now" you've got to decide
live it up somehow or comitt bortal suicide...
bortal is a made-up word meaning "boring mortal". aren't i so clever?
I liked that alot, i was just about to ask what bortal meant lol. And anything with a refernce to hell is kick-ass to me ^_^ Keep up the writing and if you got a chance come and check out mine. ^_^