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Tender Is He
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Depression "Tender Is He" 11 - 2 - 02
will is strong
heart is dry
hope is young
the pain will subside...
pain so real
mind in denial
nothingness i feel
a hollow so vile...
strive to live
hope to cope
thinking this all
to be a sour joke...
the taste lingers
taunting the tang
this pain is real
desolation remains...
when will it end
as i look on
where is the bend
i must go on...
despairing, my friend
hope is gone
heartbreak a trend...
it's been too long.
dude this is deep, the lines are short but extremely descriptive, you are a very good writer, i'm sorry i can't comment on them as often as i like (with having a fucking mac and all) but i do enjoy reading you poems, and it's more enjoyable reading them knowing the person behind them, you have a great heart and a great talent, it's in you best interest to grab ahold of it and let it take you somewhere with your life, hopefully i'll be able to do the same, everybody says i'm a great writer, but i'm kinda self concious about it, well i'll talk to you later dude, fire one up for me