Final Thoughts?

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is there a way

to avoid devastation

prevent the end

to save my nation



what will they say

the one's i love

will i go

to the light above



or will i be

forever damned

for taking my life

above a grand plan



here i lay

with my gun

someone save me

be the one



as it ticks

tick tick tock

the seconds go by

on the clock



deeper i bury

myself in thought

dwell on memories

all that was wrought



it hits twelve

the clock chimes

it's all over

it's my time



THIS MOMENT IS MINE!!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I write this in memory of my brother. altho i wonder what went thru his head in those last moments, in my heart, i never want to know the truth

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Shannon Ahern's picture

this is such a moving poem little; i really like it and i can relate to it and i give my condollences for your brother and its good to get it out
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