"Final Thoughts?" 11 - 21 - 02
is there a way
to avoid devastation
prevent the end
to save my nation
what will they say
the one's i love
will i go
to the light above
or will i be
forever damned
for taking my life
above a grand plan
here i lay
with my gun
someone save me
be the one
as it ticks
tick tick tock
the seconds go by
on the clock
deeper i bury
myself in thought
dwell on memories
all that was wrought
it hits twelve
the clock chimes
it's all over
it's my time
THIS MOMENT IS MINE!!
this is such a moving poem little; i really like it and i can relate to it and i give my condollences for your brother and its good to get it out
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love
shannon