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Giving In
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Depression pain inside
burnt on the outisde
the oncoming tide
swelling, wont subside
soul is scarred
hope is barred
life is bared
my skin is scared...
fearing the feeling
hoping for numb
foreseeing the skin peeling
knowing i will succumb...
this is my life
hollow and void
filling it, the knife
and here i am--
DESTROYED
wow, very intense poem. i hope you have somehow found a way to not "give in" , though i know how hard and impossible that feels at times.
keep on writing, you have much talent
be safe,
Leah :-)
hey. this one is good. i recalled an adema song when i read it. its awesome. keep writing, dont ever stop.
Amanda