Blind Obsession

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Love/Obsession

"Blind Obsession"    9 - 23 -01



attached to my heart

draining it's love

your false words

run it bare, dry



my mind so confused

you express love

but beat me down

with your cold words



but still you drain

and still, I love

my heart, now dry

my mind now numb....

Author's Notes/Comments: 

obsession, it speaks for itself and paints a picture of a blind heart and a forver lost and damaged soul   a scarred will and "damaged goos", so to say...

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Tabby Najour's picture

I like the simplicity in this peice. I went through all these emotions not too long ago. Very good. I always hate when you read a poem about a love going bad.. and feel the truth.

Leah Pittman's picture

awesome poem. i really liked this one a lot. feel like i could've written it myself.
thank you for commenting on so many of my poems. it made my day :)
take care,
Leah