"All of This Pain" 11 - 3 - 02
::::just imagine a Nirvana voice/melody while reading this song::::
you sit there and watch
viewing the show
the show of our lives...
the show of your life...
you sit there
and feel the hurt
the hurt of our lives...
the hurt of your life...
you sit there and cry
shedding the tears
shedding our tears...
shedding your tears...
[chorus]
i wish you'd never felt
this is what i've felt
alone what i've felt
all of this pain...
all of our pain...
so much pain...
you lay there and dwelll
on the memories
on our memories...
on your memories...
you sleep and dream of us
what became of us
what never was our life...
what never was your life...
you awake and scream
shouting all the pain
the pain of our lives...
the pain of your life...
[repeat chorus]
i look out to the world,
into to our world
all it could have been...
all that never was...
i look into to your eyes
and feel all the pain
[repeat chorus]
see all the pain...
see what does remain...
hope i will regain...
hoping never again
to feel the pain...
hoping to remove
all of the stains...
the stains on our lives...
the stains on your life...
the stains on my life...
the pain of our life...
I like it alot...one of my abstract poems, someone at work actually said it reminded him or Nirvanas come as you are hurry up...etc...but you need to check out the abstract ones to see which one he said that about when you have time cuz I don't remember and I really like this a lot and can't think of a thing I would change...very well written...keep writing...and please check out some of mine when you find time...thanks,Pam