I can't solidify this
this one one one thing
I know,
because I carry a heaving train around to catch you
and mmm, your peppermint cloud,
tasted
like
a peppermint.
How fascinating.
Really, it's brilliant, how every
poem sounds like the last and the next just
sounds like an awkward shove
how about:
I want to shove your face in the dirt,
for hurting me
and I want you to tell me exactly how it feels
I want every single detail, every benign or malicious thought
but instead, you bore me with oblivion and
school girl day dreams
I need sustenance,
I need to know how you touch..
yourself
and think
of me
or how you dont give a rat's ass.
I want you to rip off my
indecency
and blow my mind with your own
silenced weapons
let's have it then.
There is always
something distinctive and sensual about your poetry, they are always interesting and they send me to what I imagine is a woman's evolution somewhat compelled.
I really believe what I've read in your words, is what I've heard without use of any language or understanding, almost like you are interpreting a world I can only see through your eyes... Sounds crazy I guess...
Anyway, I have always admired your skills as a poet...
Peace
Dylan
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot