Mermaid

I have been

sitting outside your metaphorical window,

gathering different

ways to tell you how I have

been waiting all night just

to hear what you might have to say



Perhaps our eyes already

have met the moon at the same time

Or maybe the winter will take you when she goes



A few letters in and

my gut has spoken and

my hands have shuffled back to their high ground,

......lest they get figured out








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The world as seen through the eyes of you...
a lover/poet
is heartening, humbling, fresh, and often life-affirming.

Poetry cannot be judged, only appreciated by the mere content of its words.
In addition, it often envelopes unsolicited praise and encouragement.
Just embarking on the adventure of reading your creative poems provides this reader a unique brand of poetry from a great poet.

In your art/literature you so wonderfully integrate the aspects of the human condition, I am amazed poet, at the use of different techniques you use to make your poems extraordinary.
I am grateful for the poetry you have written its dimensions, of comprehensive experience leaves me thinking, feeling, visualizing, relative to human needs and human responsibility, expressed in all its creative form ...

peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot