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You bit your tongue when
you ate your own words
I wiped up the mess
I explained the fallout for
the gigantic bomb you set off
It was Wednesday,

we made love
and spoke of planets

 

You covered your bases,

had me read up on it

you
closed your eyes and thought I

didn't know you were pretending I was someone else

and honey you should know...

 

I faked it.

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last updated 25 December 2014 - 5:05am
©25 December 2014 - 5:04am — life_used_to_be...
11 August 2015 - 5:55am — and_hera_met_zeus
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vivid, real, and perfectly

vivid, real, and perfectly delivered.  it's nice to see your strength here, an interesting counterpoint to some of your more vulnerable works.  your confidence is infectious!

11 January 2015 - 5:12am — running_with_rabbits
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<3

Life I just have to say I love your stuff, I have mnissed reading it and I am so glad you are still writing, this is hilarious and also painful and sad, and just beautifuly writen and yet a tad mean :)

Much Love

Ashley

11 January 2015 - 7:09pm — life_used_to_be...
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haha a tad mean. I like that.

haha a tad mean. I like that. :)

"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

12 January 2015 - 8:29pm — running_with_rabbits
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:)

it's a good way to be

Much Love

Ashley

2 January 2015 - 4:15pm — a.griffiths57
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Mercury In Retrograde

Laughing  I loved the nit picking you were reduced to, serve them right for forgetting to include you, in their game of make believe. Like your poem very much a good read.

 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

2 January 2015 - 4:17pm — life_used_to_be...
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I thank you! Forgotten I was,

I thank you! Forgotten I was, but I am forgetting too. :)

"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.