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Between Here and There
In my fevered state I dream of you
Not sure where you began and I end
The half-light and sound of the television
Pull me
Lull me as a shiver and sweat.
The dogs wakes me with a whimper.
Too weak to respond
Close my eyes
Drift again.
Please invite me
Back in
The Dream
Of you.
You, You
Only you.
If only this could be more...
loved it! need to hear some more
wow... all i could think was i remember a night like that... in front of a fire, full of passion.... <> it put my heart on spin, and my stomach a flutter to remember that night... so uh.... ya, i'm just gonna say, thank you for the fabulous imagery and the memory recall!! I love it when someone's writing can tickle me like that ;-) Well done!
sometimes it's nice to dream
sometimes it's nice to dream of someone else, sometimes it's not. I feel here you do, and yet you don't, want to dream of this other person.
My Secret River
who says there was 'another
who says there was 'another person'?? :) especially since nothing is directly mentioned, lol it's funny how each person sees the same thing, in a different way and AMAZING too!!... for example, I felt he was dreaming of his lover, the one he's with, because he's happy and in love, and is always thinking of her... "where you end, and I begin" he's dozing on the couch, thinking of her... i thought it was sexy :)
Sometimes your consciousness
Sometimes your consciousness is betrayed by your subconscious.
pretty cool
this is alright. i really like the phrase half light. i will steal it
First heard that in A River
First heard that in A River Runs Through It. He talks about the half-light of the canyon. Not sure if it was in the book or movie or both. One of the rare instances where the movie was better than the book in some ways.