This isn't a dream
It's not a nightmare
It's exactly as it seems
When no one ever cares
Don't you dare to fall
Or your life will be taken
In a place you lose it all
In a world much mistaken
Don't you dare to cry
No tears shall rise
Gladly all would die
To escape from all the lies
Now you are like others
Walking helplessly around
Far away from lovers
And unable to make a sound
Trapped in this reality
You'll always be alone
You'll never defeat your insanity
If your mind is this full blown
this is very deep..while I was reading it I thought..this is deep..then I read your comment and then I thought this is really deep then I wrote this comment which isn't very deep at all. I like your poems, because they are similarly written like mine..meaning your technique and rhythm..they read very gracefully in my mind..and right now I need some grace. Wal-Mart sucked me dry of all of my creative energy..Merry Christmas..please feel free to email me directly if you want...hmm Capricorn..Jan. 16th am I close(I'm not weird..well..I always try to guess people's bday) I am easily amused..take care