If I could I would change my life.
If I could I would probably take my life.
Life is hard.
My life is hard.
So I will take this razor
and slit my wrists.
It'll all be over
in one quick twist.
Don't try and stop me.
Because before you didn't care.
So now I'll take my life
and I wouldn't care.
I know it'll hurt.
But I won't cry.
I just can't wait until I die.
I like this poem alot. I like the way it was written. It flows and sounds nice. I also like the content. I like poems that aren't always about butterflies and sunshine. I went through a really rough period in my life. I never attempted suicide, but i thought about it alot. So i can relate to this poem. It is very nice. I like it alot and keep up the good work.