How poignant is the hallow
The dissatisfaction is dominant
The optimism is shallow
The darkness is prominent
The ethereal vacuum
The convincing façade
Drowning in a deep gloom
Sinking beneath moist sod
The spark obscure
The flame is extinguishing
The unhappiness lures
An end I am wishing
No great expectations
Pessimism is presiding
Feelings of desperation
Apparently not subsiding
Negativity reigns
An endless sorrow
Motivation wanes
Not eager for tomorrow
My heart is moaning
My body requests vitality
My soul is quietly going
My mind senses fatality
The biggest room vacant
The room for improvement
I do not awaken
No particles of inspiration
No escaping
I asphyxiate in sin
My hopes are draping
How consuming is
The emptiness within
Nicely done. I like the second to last staza best, and I adore the rhyme scheme as well.