Dear God-dess...

Ride with me into the sunset, walk with me through the fire-

Ignite my soul with your flame, enlighten my mind with your Wisdom. Show me how to speak freely-

Correct me if I'm wrong...I stand corrected!!!

Let me be strong in might and will. Still a traveler of time And space. Hold my hand and lead me to the Promise Land-



When I was young I felt your spirit move me, now the evil Spirits disturb me. The devil wants to hold my hand, his Daughters want to fuck my brains out-

Mold me to perfection give me Spiritual guidence. Hipnotized

By your stare; I close my eyes and see your eyes looking at Me. Your celestial elegance is my whip appeal-



We pray and bow to you, I need you in my life, help me Continue my strife so I won't fall behind again. I'm surviving

Struggling to stay on my feet.

Dear God, mother dearest...

You gave me free will; I don't intend to kill...still I am Your son; the choosen one to live this life-



You gave me birth, the right to choose...I chose wrong!

You were my sight when i couldn't see; now I'm blind again.

You raised me in a christian home, living the catholic way-

Living a lie. The scriptures on my walls tell it all. Look Into my eye's (my mother's eye's). My mother's brown tan; I Glow with her beauty-



I won't walk away from you but I'm keeping my distance. Bring

Me closer to the truth. I know it's out there!

I am a bastard child born into this place of misery,happiness,

Order, disorder, laughters and cries. Is it all worth it?



Be my mother, I'll be the prodigal son coming back to you.

You are my God. My lady, Queen of stars; reflect your Inspiration upon me...you are my goddess...relieve me-




Author's Notes/Comments: 

God or Goddess???

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angelykdemon's picture

that's really strong, it speaks to you, makes you think (my favorite pastime. i must say that i like it. this poem is exceptionally well written.