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just me Life can be hard,
So be on your guard,
People will hurt you,
Sad but true,
Stressfull times will come,
So don't be dumb,
Be sensitive and caring,
Be outgoing and daring,
But most of all be true to yourself,
Through trouble and sadness,
Through good times filled with gladness,
Hold fast to your goal,
Don't let gloom swallow you whole,
Be bright and cheerful,
And ever be hopeful,
For life is ahead,
So don't lie in bed,
Greet the world with joy,
For it is your toy,
So go now and live,
Life as it is meant to be lived.
...So true, so true.
Cute & sorta sing-songy. Starts out gloomy, but ends out bright. That's sorta neat.
Did you run a spell check on that? & I think there's a comma splice...
:| Hey. It's me. What do you expect me to critique? Your cadence or rhyme structure?
Certainly explains why you talk so much...
[ducks] Happy holidays!
i like how you rhymed it... it takes a lot of thought to do that!
this is good!