CASTLES OF DREAMS

Falling cold winter nights

Fading darks into nothing,

Bringing only upon me

Brimming castles full of dreams.



Shadows playing in the corners

Faceless figures on the walls,

Comforming all my wishes to your call,

Creating for me more castles in the air.



Lights coming always through,

In little crevices on the stones,

Then starts to reside again in the dark

With all my castles full of dreams.





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giajl's picture

Hi, Are you blaming the the elements, for you lifes predicaments. Day dreams and wishes for a perfect existance. Your ideal enviroment and how you percieve, it should be. Or are you just like the rest of us. Who dream and wish. |Very thought stirring emotitons ,provoked by your poetry. It must obviously come from the heart. I can relate too your writings. Best regards Jim Love


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Vladimir Andrianov's picture

Thank U dorian for this one! Very interesting! If got time please read my stuff & listen to my music! Thank U in advance!

Michael Rehling's picture

Really enjoyed this one... Second stanza is particularly powerful...