Falling cold winter nights
Fading darks into nothing,
Bringing only upon me
Brimming castles full of dreams.
Shadows playing in the corners
Faceless figures on the walls,
Comforming all my wishes to your call,
Creating for me more castles in the air.
Lights coming always through,
In little crevices on the stones,
Then starts to reside again in the dark
With all my castles full of dreams.
LadyDP2000
copyright@2001
Hi, Are you blaming the the elements, for you lifes predicaments. Day dreams and wishes for a perfect existance. Your ideal enviroment and how you percieve, it should be. Or are you just like the rest of us. Who dream and wish. |Very thought stirring emotitons ,provoked by your poetry. It must obviously come from the heart. I can relate too your writings. Best regards Jim Love
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!
Thank U dorian for this one! Very interesting! If got time please read my stuff & listen to my music! Thank U in advance!
Really enjoyed this one... Second stanza is particularly powerful...