welcome to hell
were life is a shell
when u listen to children cry during the night
as they put up a fight
against their parents with no jobs
welcome to my world
this is my life
we all got to make a sacarfice
where I never relaxe
to tired to function
to scared to go to sleep
living with people who have gone through the same
this place seems so insane
seeing the pain their faces
hoping their children won't be disgraces
where violence
is the result of silence.
hey there. this is a good poem and i think you have some talent. depressing but true some ppl live this life. hope you keep it up! Later!
I like yuor poem and i understand where you are comin from with it. I think it may be just a bit too simplistic. Any ways you do have a talent for writing.. so keep it up and let me know the next time you post some shit.