Chaos

 this world in chaos

 need spiritual renewal

save us from ourselves

 

love is the answer

enlightenment is crucial

changing destiny

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Changed this totally

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MajesticDravon's picture

I once was a man...

I was a man of darkness.

A being of busted dreams and mislead trust.

I was a man from a bloody past.

Now here I am.  A different man.

Love came into my life.

Love came and shattered the broken me.

My wife helped reform the better man I am.

Helped me tame the raging beast I called anger.

She came to love me as I am.

But in doing so made me a man of light.

 

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Good haiku.  Inspiration is best.  Thank you.


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Haiku

Love can be defined
By a chaos deep inside
Enlight'ning? Perhaps


You found my poetical weakness. Thank you for that.


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Sassylass's picture

Haiku2

deep love is defined

personal self  sacrifice

 gives more than she takes

 

Two live together

loves through ALL tribulations

love never to fail

 

real love isn't just lust love or just emotional.

it looks outside self to meet all needs of our partner.

it serves one another, it's loyal,and it works on every negative thing that opposes it.

i had this kind of marriage,sweet, until he died.

he had a violent background,but he also became a man lit in light ,echoing my light and love.

i pray the best for you!

Koko


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

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Thanks

Keep your readers happy.

nice poem on the spot!

see ya!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words