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Torn
I want to feel
I want to love
I want my father back
I want to push him away
I want to run away from here
And yet I want to stay
Why do I feel like this?
Why have I lost so much in so short a time?
It wasn't so long ago that I was happy
Wasn't I?
I loved myself
I miss it, who I was
It has changed
Why?
Why does it have to change?
Why do I have to loose my innocence?
Why can't I just remain a child forever?
What have I done to deserve this?
I was good, wasn't I?
Kassie,
You are a brilliant writer, a thinker and very expressive. With such talent as this why would you ever leave a poem untitled? IN a rush? #9 poem could very well be titled, "Answer This", your #10 poem can easily be seen as "Torn". But title them, for they delve into your thoughts about why you wrote in the first place! I love your poems, I don't want to sound negative, thank you for writing!--Sam