Cold Earth

I climb, I reach

I dig my hands into the cold damp earth

I can't find a way out

So I dig up

It's so dark

I can't breathe

I open my mouth to scream

but my mouth is filled with cold black earth

I twist my body trying to escape

I'm lost in the dark

I'm lost in my grave

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this one for English class.

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Brian Kaelble's picture

Interesting piece of work. Not terribly positive, I have to say. Very depressing and hopeless sounding. Although not terribly creative imagery, it does convey what you're trying to say pretty well. Um, feel better?