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Dreaming
How do you swamp my dreams
and clench my thoughts each night and day?
It seems you dominate my heart
and mind in every way.
How is it possible one man can sustain
the power to preserve this trance,
You've established control of my every emotion
just from your first stirring glance.
I've tried to confront you -
To show my affection
In hope our eyes meet
And our hearts make connection
I already love you -
You may not believe
You've won me entirely.....
Never I'd leave.
I long to possess your heart and
hold your body every night
I want to hear you say you love me
and feel you hold me tight.
Until the day comes when I can confront you
and tell you how I feel
I'll dream of you and I each night
under impressions it was real.
beautiful
Stephanie This is such a lovely poem - yes, bittersweet indeed, but still so beautiful in raw emotion. I love it! Regards Donkerman
i luv this poem
Oh, ye of little faith! You should go tell him now. If he isn't floored, he is dead! Gracious sakes alive girl! If you go tell him, take some 02 and some defib equipment.
After reading several of your poems. I have come to the conclusion that you are not only a hopeless romantic, but you have a magnificent way of expressing it.
Oooh...the raw emotion of the moment is so evident. I really appreciate your writing style in this poem, the short, concise examples you give, the rhyme, and the open questions. It seems like you're talking the situation over with yourself, so it progresses naturally...just a shame nothing came of it. Have fun,
Once again, this is a bittersweet poem....bitter, coz the persona has not told or opened her heart to his/her love...and sweet coz of the romantic devotion he/she feels.... thanxs for oopening up that bit of your heart for us to read...it is brave and commendable of u. I think u have a wonderful way of penning very heartfelt words, Stephanie....and it's something i really admire. Smilesz... I 'm glad to know u....and welcome to postpoems~!! Hope u have a lovely stay here... By the way...if u have the time, do try 2 of my poems, which are somehow related to this piece... 1. Dreaming (coz it's the same title...haha) 2. Just There (coz the similar specific theme of love) Smilesz.....enjoy~!