All my demons have grown so tall
but I find divine bliss in alcohol
It burns my throat, stops the tears
scares and frightens my fears
My head hurts but then I drink
and I forget that im a garden hose kink
You found me tired eyed and collapsed
clutching a plastic cup, and a bottle grasped
Knowing how much I drank, you never knew I could
I looked at you and said "I feel pretty damn good"
On the outside I look fine
but on the inside I am dying
This could be the death of me some day
but I wouldnt have it any other way
Id rather waste my time within a dying daze
than to create more scars for people to gaze
My pain is the cause of my lonliness
my lonliness is the cause of my sadness
hey that is really good. your a really good writer. your poems really touch me!
LOVE it!!! i know the exact feeling just havent been able to say it! let alone that well! i am sorry that thats how you feel! but that doesnt change the fact that is a kickass poem! like everything else you write! keep up the writing id hate to have to stalk you down and make you write! xoxoxoxo loves you lots. licks n kisses jai
This Is Deep, Alcohol Is Not The Answer Tyler, I'm Sure You Can Do Much Better Than That, Alcohol Wont Solve Anything, Your Mind Makes You Think It Does, Its true, Alcohol Makes You Forget ABout You're Problems, But Just For A Moment, And For Some People It's The Point Of It, But Then You'll Remember Your Problems After Being Drunk, So It Doesnt Really Make Sence. You're Not Lonely In This World, God Is There, He Always Is, Talk To Him, He Will Be Listening, Even Though You Cant See Him, He's by Your Side Ok, Well I loved the Way You Clearly Expressed Yourself In This Poem, Keep it Up, take Care
~*Laura