Alcohol

All my demons have grown so tall

but I find divine bliss in alcohol

It burns my throat, stops the tears

scares and frightens my fears

My head hurts but then I drink

and I forget that im a garden hose kink



You found me tired eyed and collapsed

clutching a plastic cup, and a bottle grasped

Knowing how much I drank, you never knew I could

I looked at you and said "I feel pretty damn good"

On the outside I look fine

but on the inside I am dying



This could be the death of me some day

but I wouldnt have it any other way

Id rather waste my time within a dying daze

than to create more scars for people to gaze

My pain is the cause of my lonliness

my lonliness is the cause of my sadness

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Michaela Biggins's picture

hey that is really good. your a really good writer. your poems really touch me!

Jamie's picture

LOVE it!!! i know the exact feeling just havent been able to say it! let alone that well! i am sorry that thats how you feel! but that doesnt change the fact that is a kickass poem! like everything else you write! keep up the writing id hate to have to stalk you down and make you write! xoxoxoxo loves you lots. licks n kisses jai

Laura Campos's picture

This Is Deep, Alcohol Is Not The Answer Tyler, I'm Sure You Can Do Much Better Than That, Alcohol Wont Solve Anything, Your Mind Makes You Think It Does, Its true, Alcohol Makes You Forget ABout You're Problems, But Just For A Moment, And For Some People It's The Point Of It, But Then You'll Remember Your Problems After Being Drunk, So It Doesnt Really Make Sence. You're Not Lonely In This World, God Is There, He Always Is, Talk To Him, He Will Be Listening, Even Though You Cant See Him, He's by Your Side Ok, Well I loved the Way You Clearly Expressed Yourself In This Poem, Keep it Up, take Care
~*Laura