Shameful and afraid
from all that is paved
but as I look to those within the light
my eyes burn for being in the dark
feeling cold and lonely
welcome killers so boldly
Shadow Hunters please come for me
all this time Ive gone blind
and still unable to see
This Darkness is killing me
come and follow your art
finish me off
my life is tearing me apart
Stillness enough
Im not so tough
you would cut me easy with your wakizashi
I bend like origami
dont let me live
Use that katana
kill me please...
beautiful
It sounds good, you wrote that quick though, right? that sounded like a flow. inspired by FFXI im guessing, HUH?
it sounds cool, it'd be even better if you could add more to it... But sometimes dne is done when you write poetry...