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As I Lay here, dying
As I lay here dying
Its real hard but im trying
to live my life, the best I can
but these flames
too strong to fan
Forever is such a long time to wait
I cant remember myself up to today
I guess this must be fate
I feel so far away
I hope to find myself again one day
Im stuck between the pages of this book
I only took one look
but thats all it took
Im so far behind
but ill keep reading, Ill catch up some day
one day ill be gone
im never gonna look back
because courage is something i do not lack
I have to stop looking out this window
I have to stand up and get ready to go
I have to win this fight
The enemy I will smite
until the end, when i see the light
in the middle of the night
wow i have felt
like that to
and yes it suxs to .
Damn your writing really kicks ass...each poem I read I can relate to you more and more...I go through alot of the same shit as you do...or at least it sounds like it...if you ever wanna talk about things to vent...talk to me i'm kelseykicks11... sometimes its good to vent stuff to a person you dont know personally...I do it all the time!...but ne ways... I really liked the fact that you weren't a pansy ass and cussed it really gave your poem more too it! Keep writing I am looking forward to more stuff! catch you later! bye
I think this is cool, and you rhymed pretty good on it.
you will be back one day, man...we all will. when we take that one look, and finally see the "real" us at that moment and begin to understand who we are...we no longer regret as we did before...we no longer have to look back.Like i said in "shadow of death(my epitaph)", -the path behind me closes, though the path before parts, i don't know where i'm going while the darkness is slowly flowing out from my heart...- you remind me alot of myself when i started writing...except you are different. that's a compliment. Keep it up, and i will keep reading your stuff.
-Dustin Wallace
C/O 2004
Bartlett-Yancey Sr. High School
wow... that's amazing.. i feel like i can completely relate to you.. keep writing.. you're really good