Just like Rain

Im wasting my time

using up all i have, with this life of mine

its a cold shock up my spine

Sands of an hour glass slipping through my fingers

as this unnamed feeling crawls and lingers

can you peer inside

the darkness in my eye?

this is a lie

my life is passing me by



Everything I try to do is in vain

as I begin to spread the pain

I feel more insane



You dont understand because you never took the time to look

you would have seen all the shit I took

Take the time to hear

you can sense my fear

Take the time to smell

and know that I

am under your spell



If you knew how i feel

you would understand

Look at my face and see my pain

see my tears fall

Just like rain...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

No comment...what does it mean to YOU!?

View kitez's Full Portfolio
tags:
poetvg's picture

lovely pieces

كlهçk ®ُ§é's picture

Hey! I think this poem means the people on the outside, loooking in and dont know how you would really feel kinda like shrinks when they ask whats wrong....*tails off* hehe! I like this one tho =^_^= Im feelin yah on this...hehe keep on writing your vuri good!
~Lots O' Luvins~
<34L
~*/Sk!pPEr\*~