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After reading your bio, I was

After reading your bio, I was determined to read more of your work, so I used Google Translate to unveil your hidden treasures. It was worth it!  This expertly crafted, compact and intensely eloquent heartsong is a volume of emotion in five lines. Very clever, the way you illuminated your loved one by focusing on darkness—a darkness so deep in contrast that you are "lost the the abyss of the new moon". 

 

A thrill to read you. Sublime work. 

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Thanks a million!

That's so heart-touching! Thanks a million! Smile