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Feelings... tryin to figure this puzzle
you got me
in
knots
tangled up in knots
cause im
thinking
of you
consumed by what we were
wanting nothing more
than
to
not
remember
but
do nothing
but
scratching for thoughts
other
than your touch
hearing
your
words
and knowing
if
i saw you
i would crash
as i crash
before just a vision
i want you out of me
though
you are everywhere
and
nowhere near me
it was you
it had only been you and
now
i
dont
want it to be
though
it still is
scratching away the fear of
alone-ness
i rather be
but you wont
escape my heart
consumed
im consumed by you
consumed
consumed
consumed
con - fucking - sumed
and
i know you dont care
and that hurts most of all
im ....
tied up in knots
trying to get over you
and
when i do
those ropes will be yours to keep
hey.. you seem to me a very good poet and this is one of your sweet poems indeed..love to read your more poems if you add..and hope you will go through my poetry if it touches your heart too
Second Chances
(ness) again at random, wow. I would like you to write a poem using only three one syllable words...just a thought, an expansionary exercise. Otherwise, the poems are all equal in tone and emotion values, a solemn toning bell from your personal hell- And your talent is so huge! Sing to us a song of joy occasionally - Lady A