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Unleashed
Time was everything to me.
not today, but tomorrow.
Live not now, but in two years
hopefully one
My room was my world, a world with closed windows
I painted myself the way I wanted, inside of my head
Then I let him enter, when halfway opening the door
He passed through with adoration
Curiously, I followed him
I let him touch me from distance, not near my heart
The days were square and lonely, before I let him in
Not did I live, I simply existed deep within
I have been observant and maybe you will save me
My heart has been abandoned
Please come close and touch me,
Unleash my emotions of which I have been ashamed
My heart has been abandoned
Please come close and touch me,
Unleash my emotions of which I have been ashamed
very sweet poem with about heart feeling lines.. well done and its sure you can write poetry so be committed to it and add more.. thanks for your promise of doing comments as you said tomorrow... best of luck
mixed emotions send mixed messages, i admire the feeling of this, tho something not experienced personally, i see there is much to learn from others feelings