The beauty and the begining that is spring...full of abundance.
Makes way for the long days of summer...full of work and full of play.
And life is good.
Fall arrives with a cooling of the days
Small hints here and there of the winter days to come.
Days that will become colder...bleak and unyeilding.
Finally empty, like the decidious tree that has lost all its leaves
Throughout the beauty of spring, the long summer days
and the cooling of fall, the little sparrow sings her beautiful song.
Full of happiness, joy and wonder. Life is good.
As fall moves into winter her song becomes infrequent.
Spending more time trying to stay alive.
Flying further afield seeking that to sustain her.
The discovery of a feeder brings new life and hope for the coming days.
She returns again and again gaining strength and again, she sings her song.
But alas it is not to be.
This feeder too with its initial abundance will dwindle down
until it gives its final offering.
The little sparrow sings her song from the naked branches of the tree that holds her.
Sings her beautiful song although the cold of the surroundings is chilling her pittiful body.
Soon the chill will cease the song, her eyes will close, her body will begin to freeze.
What's left of her heart valiantly tries to continue to keep the whole alive.
But it too will succomb to the cold.
And the frozen little body in the grasp of a empty tree
tumbles silently from the branches, cold and frozen.
good poem!
I am moved by it
if you permit,I will translate it into chinese
Such a sad little story but I wonder in its reading if you were speaking only of the sparrow?
The Sparrow could so easily symbolize a person's life. Someone that fights on and on with small pieces of hope given ~ only in the end to sucumb.
I see by reading your comments on this piece that you know another friend of mine ~ Gary.
I hae enjoyed my visit with you today in your hall. Please if you get the chance visit me.
Love
Lesa
Deja-vue Today is Sparrow day...
earlier Today I critiqued a poem
written by Elizabeth Dandy;
www.postpoems.com/cgi-bin/displaypoem.cgi?pid=76639
I love sparrows - my favorites are the blackbirds
however with their shining raven crest.
I enjoyed your poem - Keep Writing - Keep singing
Bizarre poem. I wonder what prompted you to write such a sad story. A little devil in me is grinning, and whispers maybe you could have dragged out the little birdie's death a little longer ... that's what this dirge does to me!!1
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