erotic pictures of in and out
leaving little room to doubt
the strong impression you have made
not allowed to languish and fade
sticky threads of sex
warp and weft designed to vex
light the way to where we've been
haunt the shift from sane to in
the only thing that's true?
weaving a web to capture you
WOW! A wonderful piece!
Dear Karen, Hi! First poem of yours that I have read. I love it. Beautiful words. Teresa jacobs
I like the last line. very... tight. shift from sane to in... yeah.. I might be "barrowing" that umm... idea... finally found your pages... muahhaaahh.. critique binge.