Hiding Place

Into the coop where

There is safety in numbers.

Feathers and fears rise



Cluck, cluck and squawk!

Invader! the egg snatcher!

"Shhh, I don't want eggs."



Fluttering, flapping.

"Be still, no need to panic,

I’ll be gone in time."



Settled and calm now

I look around and see the

Orange light filtering



Cool and damp under

Adobe dome, breathing

Dank chicken exhale.



The feathers and dung

Fill my nose with smells of ease

And comfort and sleep.



My place. No one else

Would guess I am even here.

Close my eyes and dream



Of cluck, softly, cluck

Warm and roll tomorrow’s chicks

There is safety here.






Author's Notes/Comments: 

The chicken coops in Iran were dug outs topped with mud brick domes...an ideal hiding place for a young girl.

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Rachelle Wiegand's picture

Karen, This is very sad, a travesty that these kinds of worries were ever in the mind of a little girl. You worried probably a lot, and left not too much time to be a kid. I am guessing. Other girls were playing with Barbies, while I was being made into my uncle's personal Barbie. At the ripe age of seven. I feel so heartbroken for you. I know exactly where this is written from. I love your style. Keep writing it out, you know how writing eases the soul. thanks for clueing me on this piece, it's wonderfully written. I Hope that you have made peace with it.

Deborah E Russell's picture

Interesting...i know the hiding place and i know the smell and the heat and eyes burning