with day light breaking
the cold night air fades
the crickets settle now
and the birds begin to stir
people wake and rise to the day
while i rest me head to sleep
two realitys on one earth
on of light, people, and warmth
and one of shadows, silence, and darkness
when you mix realitys you make a third
with people and silence
and shadows and light
your days are not days
and nights are not nights
you don't excist you are not there
like it very much... the way you did this one is impressive and hope you write more and more.. i feel that you are adavncing as a good poetess... love your themes... I am poet with 6 books and member of postpoems..hope you read through my poems too and comment...
afzal shauq