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bad memories
I can remember
a time in my life
that my best friend
was a razer knife
She was always there
in my time of need
I still loved her
when she made me bleed
she kissed my wrists
and the pain went away
No more bad memories
nothing more bad to say
i had to hide her
from everyone you see
they would not understand
like you and me
when i felt alone
Like i did not exist
i played with my friend
she danced on my wrists
i could not hide
my friend anymore
my scars were too deep
i fell to the floor
"i thought we were friends!!"
i screamed at her
She did not answer back
now everythings a blurr
so now i lay me
down to sleep
it seems my "friend"
has cut me too deep
i shall sleep on my pillows
for the rest of eternity
all because i trusted
a friend that would never be.
My fav line is 'danced on my
My fav line is 'danced on my wrists...' The irony is superb.
Ty very much i love this
Ty very much i love this piece in general i will have to check some of ur work out!!
Very very powerful message
Very very powerful message here! And a great delivery! :)
good write know how you feel
good write know how you feel I have definitely been there. If Ur interested you should read garage on my profile
brave
This is a very brave and powerful read. I like how you personified the razor blade as the "best friend" It was also very thoughtful of you to add the author's note at the end and you are right there is always someone willing to help! You also provided powerful images! Good job Miss Marie=p
powerful and scarey because
powerful and scarey because its so romantically written I could easily be seduced if it wasnt for my moral conditioning its funny how much you think you want to die untill someone tries to take life away from you. then you really find out just how much you want it when the blade is in anothers hands... I think this is an exceptional write! Excellent work! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Its very true u dont kno wat
Its very true u dont kno wat u have until its gone or against u. Im very happy that i snapped out of it wen i did. The feeling was so intoxicating i was addicted...until i realized i wud lose any shred of happiness i ever had.