J Swooz
Cursed with this mentality
Is it fiction or reality
Never goin down down down
like zero gravity
Addicted to some things
Cant get drugs outta me
Choppin down your trees
He who shined, was the baddest seed
Stashin diamond rings
never blessed wit the finer things
But money dont talk (nah)
Its just signing thing
Under the weather
Glowin in the weeping rain
All to yourself, So thats how you're keeping things?
I like it!
Poetry is song in speech, an art which renders an essence to the reader with words and sounds. Rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, assonance, and harmony all enhance the emotional tone of the words. So, read your poems aloud before submitting them to readers for all of us to enjoy. It is as an opportunity to give yourself the poet, a chance to experience what your audience might very well feel. At times it will be necessary to use a literal context in the sense that the language of choice has a need to conform to a universal understanding, punctuation and correct spelling may be required to convey the message. I am not a man of letters I just love poetry as a form of lyric communication that is almost as old and diverse as all humankind… Keep writing, keep learning.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
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