You were there, in my time of need;
From its prison, my heart you freed.
You were always thoughtful and very giving,
Showed me life really was worth living,
Comforted me when I was sad
But only shared when you were glad.
You made me laugh, you made me cry,
Then broke my heart. I wanted to die.
Walking away with no word wasn't fair,
But I want you to know that I still care.
Your problems you would not share with me,
But I think I have solved the mystery.
The one for whom your heart did yearn,
Could not love you in return.
She destroyed with hate, your life's plan;
Leaving you heartsick, hopeless, a broken man.
You truly loved her, although she left,
You love her still...without hope...bereft.
Wow that was good!
Im a girl and I can relate!
Great Poem!
Keep it up!
i really like this, your timing is impecable.
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Jan,
This is a lovely poem about the broken man. It hurts to feel the hurts. Keep going.