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IF TOMORROW NEVER COMES
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Excursions of the Heart I may never give you a hug
Say "I'm sorry" or "I love you"
Tell you what you mean to me
I may never tell you goodbye
These things I need to say
For what if tomorrow never comes?
For every wrong I've ever done
If I was ever too busy or hurried
Made you feel ignored or sad
Put you down, caused you pain
Our relationship destroyed
I need to say I'm sorry
Regardless of what comes
Even when we are apart
When I'm not here to tell you
Remember that I love you.
Throughout all eternity
I will always love you
Through good times
And bad times too
As long as I live
I'm here for you,
This will always be true
Even if tomorrow never comes
Your first stanza is amazing and draws you in, but I feel like it goes a little downhill after that. If you had more continuity, it would increase the worth of your work tenfold.
Jan:
This poem expresses a desire for all the wrong done if never given a chance. This poem awoke my feelings to understand that we must live for today and appreciate all we have and not have not for all our possessions and wordly possessions can be taken from us in a mere heatbeat.
The true beauty in life is surely the beauty of life itself for it can be taken from us instantly like a grain of pure sand blowing so gently across a sandy white beach.
Jan-thank you for this poem of beauty and inspiration-it has truly awakened my thoughts of the appreciation of all around me.
Regards,
Dave Richardson