04/03/02
is it unlucky
when i try to reach my goals
and do not
or is this a matter of circumstance
surely you know it is
neither of these
it is all up to you
love a person, love life
love yourself
what you do, all of these
are the same
they all come from you
it's all up to you
the fleeting moments
in your grasp
let them fly with such joy
from within you, this is you
part of you, all of you
living now, for today
reject them -- you die
in every instance
not demanding
not leaving
for such would reject
what you love
not running away
but surrounding your life
and your heart with your loves
with your very own breath
let this be true
for every moment
this is how it is
for every fleeting
savoring, loving
heartbeat of your life
wonderful... the poem is done in very rhythmic way and can be visualized too... your comments on my poems are be appreciated.. hope your comments on my other poems will be there in litle detailed form to add your comments in my new book... your poetry is really impressive and meaningful.... I am known as peace wiher poet and here is my famous say ....((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))hope you keep this say in record and pass on to your friends and fans..
I see you have done it again John touched the flame and make it to shine out where other can see it... you have drew form that well of emotions as only you can.you are what i always known a very talented writer that speak with passion....sign (lady whisper)christina