'03 My Angel

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2003

I can't take this anymore!

Maybe I AM depressed?

I feel crazy and very scared.

I'm frightened of myself again.

I need you right now.

"...Don't let your feelings run your life..."

I'm trying not to but I am weak!

"...No your are not, you are stronger than that..."

Sometimes I don't know where I came from.

Though  you are unique, I could only do so much.

I'll meet you half way to watch you overcome..."

My unbalanced thoughts won't subside.

What if I get lost again?

"...You will not get lost..."

How do you know that?

"...Because I am your guide..."

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Don't ever stop floating around me baby...

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Erryn Lundquist's picture

thank you for the critique. sometimes i forget that my work is posted here because no one comments anymore.

i've read several of yours, and think that on some levels, our thoughts are very similiar. Cry Myself to Sleep, I Love You, and this one, My Angel have been my favorites so far (of course, i haven't scrolled down the entire page yet) because i can relate well to them. when i read these words, i can easily envision a time when i felt exactly the same.
keep it up. i don't know what it is about putting things down on paper (or monitor), but it seems to take on some of the weight you carry.