20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Martin Haas (not verified)
Jim, Don't know what's wrong with the server! 2nd time. I wouldn't change a word of this poem. I resonated with the positive role you give language, am so used to hearing about the "death of this or that." I don't know what the word Sanyata means, but didn't have to. It was a mystery word to me that enlarged upon the previous stanzas, and I thought it was a sacred place.
20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Teresa Jacobs (not verified)
Dear Jim, HI! I am fast becoming a devoted reader of your poetry. You are good and I like. Please write more. It is indeed a pleasure to find true talent. THANKS! Bye! Teresa
20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Teresa Jacobs (not verified)
Dear Jim, HI! I am fast becoming a devoted reader of your poetry. You are good and I like. Please write more. It is indeed a pleasure to find true talent. THANKS! Bye! Teresa
Jim, Don't know what's wrong with the server! 2nd time. I wouldn't change a word of this poem. I resonated with the positive role you give language, am so used to hearing about the "death of this or that." I don't know what the word Sanyata means, but didn't have to. It was a mystery word to me that enlarged upon the previous stanzas, and I thought it was a sacred place.
Dear Jim, HI! I am fast becoming a devoted reader of your poetry. You are good and I like. Please write more. It is indeed a pleasure to find true talent. THANKS! Bye! Teresa
Dear Jim, HI! I am fast becoming a devoted reader of your poetry. You are good and I like. Please write more. It is indeed a pleasure to find true talent. THANKS! Bye! Teresa