Where am I now?
The road seems so untraveled.
Even if I knew
where I were headed,
who would recognize
the name of the place of being,
the state I aim to reach.
Unpack the rifle.
Calibrate the scope.
Load the chamber.
Pull the trigger,
and I fly.
Let loose by contained explosion,
I can finally soar.
Maybe this time
I can find the overlapping seam
where reality starts.
Oh,
you didn’t know
you haven’t seen reality yet,
this is only just a taste.
You’ve been licking cake batter,
but you haven’t seen the frosted finish
and blown out the candles,
ready to dive in
to the experience.
I can’t bake your cake for you,
that wouldn’t be right.
But it’s ok,
you’ve been learning how
to expand the in between space
if only you’ve been paying attention.
Now, if you can tell me
which way is next,
I can carry on.
Your guess is better than mine,
mine is too influenced
by the ways I’ve already been,
the roads I’ve trampled down
and the signs I’ve seen.
So just pick a way
for me to go
and I’ll leave you to your baking.
extended metaphor = goodness
especially because it involves cake.
I like this:
'Oh,
you didn’t know
you haven’t seen reality yet,'
For whatever reason the "oh, [pause] you didn't know" is lovely to me.