Read Your Poem Earnestly

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You, We Me

Just the right poem at the right time.

Read yours while I missed my mom.

The wind had carried her perfume

and I did stop from

the computer.

Sniffed the air around

A strong whiff came

bringing her

scent

and dissolved

into the atmosphere.

I worship

my mother just like you.

She is my Universe and thus

get your message very clear too;

Perfectly through your verse.

Thank you. Ernest!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The wind carry's her perfume to me from across the land in the east and I feel the nearness of my mom though separated by distance, mountains and seas.

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

Hi Jayati, beautiful piece,so who's poem about their mom inspired this piece you don't say in the piece ,just curious.You are lucky your's only overseas,mine passed when I was 13...

Ernest Bevans's picture

This poem made me smile. ...and mirroring the poem i felt the same joy and missing my mother I pick up the phone
and called her...