Rehab

 

My greatest fear is to be away too long

I can't bear much time, for I'm not that strong

 

Will my boys sleep peacefully

Or will slumber evade them because of me

 

I want to escape and prove them wrong

Because I don't feel like them, I don't belong

 

I'm not like others with this disease

Give me the chance to show you, to make you see

 

I'm a fighter after all

When push comes to shove I am ready to brawl

 

You didn't see me though or didn't care

You locked me away and stole my air

 

You judged me with fake pity in your eyes

But you were full of shit and full of lies

 

Now today you use it against me

To strip away my only sanity

 

How fucking dare you, you hypocrite

To say I'm not a good mother, to say I'm unfit

 

The only reason I remained there day after day

Is for the boys you are now trying to strip away

 

You rule with an iron fist, like a King

You took my freedom, my future, and my wedding ring

 

But you will never take my beautiful sons

Without first hearing the ringing echo of my gun

 

 

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AdamKeithMcElwainPoetry's picture

Nice

I love how it ends, and the last line. Powerful. 

a.griffiths57's picture

    Here here. Let's hope it

 

 

Here here. Let's hope it does not come to the use of a gun; but very understandable emotions here at being seperated from your sons. I hope everything improves for you and you are reunited with your sons. A very moving thought provoking, emotionaly charged poem, I like your poem very much. 


 

 

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