[for Judy Costea, Magnificent Poetess, this love story]
She is a beautiful girl,
with magenta-tinted hair
(close-cropped, like a teenaged boy's;
herself only fifteen, too);
amply gorgeous, fulsome curves;
arms hanging from the chain's end,
bare feet hardly reach the floor---
cold, rough stone, the pimp's cellar,
where he keeps her like preserves,
except when he can sell her
company to high bidders,
who use a wand for lashes---
with only temporary
welts that fade within an hour.
She has no sense of clock's time,
or day to night succession;
but only the pimp's clients:
those who injure her private
parts (thnking infliction of
pain is proof of their manhood---
pain assuaged by a few coins).
Then comes the hour she will not
ever forget: the hoof-sounds
of camels, and the smooth slide
of swords unsheathed (an escort
of guards sworn to loyalty);
and a voice making demand
in well-educated Greek.
The terrified pimp's shrill wheeze
brings a brief smile to her face,
despite her fear of what the
cash changing hands means for her.
But it is good Roman gold
(even on this far frontier
money transcends barriers).
In the dark stairwell the pimp
whimpers; and she does not know
he saw the jeweled ring of
Inimitable Livers---
friends of dead Mark Antony,
pledged to serve or to avenge
the affairs of his stepson,
who watches, behind the pimp,
as the chain is unlocked from
her wrists. Then a cloak is placed
on her nakedness (not quite
to her bare feet). This scholar
(of stars and history)
says to her, "You are now free."
Following him into the
sunlight she beholds them all:
two other scholars (like him),
the guards that protect them, and
servants bearing treasures (gold,
incense, myrrh), on this journey,
this pilgrimage bound westward.
Silent, not intrusive, she
joins him (who is named by the
sole word, Starwatcher) on the
camel kneeling before them.
His amazement pleases her
who, masterless now, wants to
please him who bought her life back.
Starward
[jlc]
what a beautiful poem from a ghaslty backround ;D
Oh Jer'
This is magnificent.... It is breath taking how it ends... I truly enjoyed this wonderful write....
How she was kept as his slave for pleasure of other men to use her for their own satisfaction and then she was set free, taken away from her pimp... now because Starwatcher has given her life back, she now wants to please him....
Just beautiful... I love it...
And Thank you for dedicating this piece to me... I am honored and pleased....
Peace and Love...
Judy