I like the way we live, the heartfelt talks
we share intensely on our evenings' walks
that you enjoy, barefoot. I like to hold
you close upon this hill, our makeshift seat
for watching stars drift. As your grass-stained feet
(that know how to avoid stone trauma) meet
and tease mine (that are still shod in those old
costly sandals that Rome manufactures), I
am staggered by the sheer reality
of you. Not even epic poetry
(despite what scowling scholars might reply)
can adequately trace---in any measure---
the overwhelmingly abundant pleasure
and blessing brought forth by your company.
Better than songs remembered from sweet dreams,
your words---in softest, Aramaic drawl---
sink deep into my spirit to enthrall.
You whisper, and it gathers into verses.
In your eyes' gaze I find bright, starlike gleams.
Somehow, even your shyest smile disperses
all cares and my most troubling memory.
You bring with you the best of Gaililee---
your Gospel faith and utter, awesome beauty
(no skeptic unbeliever can refute me).
Never before have I been this near to
such love, and joy, and truth as dwell in you.
Who needs some dominus' craven conceit?---
more preferable is kissing your bare feet.
Who wants to lose a precious life to death?---
as it draws closer with each exhaled breath.
The sum of such existence is engraved
upon a slab; past that, none can be saved,
and hell becomes the lonesome destiny.
But we know Whom we have believed, and He
keeps that which we, in faith, commit to Him
forever. Neither fear, nor wish, nor whim
can wrest that from Him. In His Kingdom, hence,
marriage will not be needed as the fence
that keeps sin out or, otherwise, temptation.
But licit lovers, who have loved Salvation,
will love each other, there, eternally
in endless fellowship and conversation.
All I can say is that this poems speaks truth. Everything written there is what it means to find a true satisfying love in your partner and your God. Wonderful again, I keep finding it difficult to think of words to describe how much these poems strike me.
Jere'
This eloquent love poem speaks volumes to ones heart and soul... How can someone find the words to describe the love in this beautiful poem, the love you speak of... no words are suffient enough...
Thank you for directing me to read this powerful love poem...
Peace and Love
Judy
this includes so many specific details that are necessary to a relationship, the little things that constitute a true picture of who these people are and how they relate to each other. alongside the snapshot of the relationship is the never-faltering truth of scripture, which blends so well with your style. i truly love this series. ~sarah